KEYS FOR SUCCESS
Know your readers
Promote your cause-not quarrel
Be reasonable
Be reasonable
Non debatable
Select a topic
Non debatable
Debatable
Personal experiences
Personal ideas
CHAPTER 19 PERSUADING READERS TO ACT
KEYS FOR SUCCESS
Know your readers
Promote your cause-not quarrel
Be reasonable
TOPICS TO CONSIDER
Personal experiences
Personal ideas
Communit concerns
National or international affairs
"No comment" topics
PERSUADING READERS TO ACT
Select a topic
Non debatable
Debatable
Choose and analyze your readers
Narrow your focus and determine our purpose
Generate ideas and support
Organize your thinking
Write your first draft
Share our essay
Revise
Edit/proofread
Prepare and publish essay
National or international affairs
PERSUADING READERS TO ACT
Select a topic
Non debatable
Debatable
Choose and analyze your readers
Narrow your focus and determine our purpose
Generate ideas and support
Organize your thinking
Write your first draft
Share our essay
Revise
Edit/proofread
Prepare and publish essay
"No comment" topics
Write your first draft
Share our essay
Revise
Edit/proofread
Prepare and publish essay
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C19
Chapter 18 Outline
KEYS FOR SUCESS
Explore all positions
Go beyond pure opinion
Take a measured stance
Take a measured stance
Select and narrow a topic
Take stock
Get inside the issue
Refine your position
Traditional pattern
Current affairs
Blatent confession
Burning issues
Organize our development and support
Traditional pattern
Blatent confession
Delayed gratification
CHanged mind
Winning over
CHAPTER 18 TAKING A POSITION
KEYS FOR SUCESS
Explore all positions
Go beyond pure opinion
Take a measured stance
TOPICS TO CONSIDER
Current affairs
Burning issues
Dividing lines
Fresh fare
GUIDELINES
Select and narrow a topic
Take stock
Get inside the issue
Refine your position
Organize our development and support
Traditional pattern
Blatent confession
Delayed gratification
CHanged mind
Winning over
Write your first draft
Opening
Development
Closing
Title
SHare our position
Revise
Edit and proofread
Prepare and publish essay
Dividing lines
CHanged mind
Fresh fare
GUIDELINES
Select and narrow a topic
Take stock
Get inside the issue
Refine your position
Organize our development and support
Traditional pattern
Blatent confession
Delayed gratification
CHanged mind
Winning over
Write your first draft
Opening
Development
Closing
Title
SHare our position
Revise
Edit and proofread
Prepare and publish essay
Opening
Development
Write your first draft
Opening
Development
Closing
Title
Closing
Title
SHare our position
Revise
Edit and proofread
Prepare and publish essay
17.11.05
Suggested Topics for Persuasive Papers
- Abortion
- Advertising Ethics
- Affirmative Action
- Animal Rights
- Anti-Semitism
- Assisted Suicide
- Australian Aborigines
- Bilingual Education
- Bioethics
- Biotechnology
- Business Ethics
- Capital Punishment
- Censorship
- Civil Liberties and Anti-Terrorism Measures
- Class Action Lawsuits
- Cloning
- Conscientious Objectors
- Corporate Corruption
- Corporate Responsibility
- Creationism
- Dress Codes in School
- Drug Legalization
- Drug Testing
- Ebonics and Black English
- Endangered Species
- Environmental Ethics
- Euthanasia
- Evolution
- False Memory
- Female Genital Mutilation
- Foreign Aid
- Free Speech
- Freedom of the Press
- Gay Parents
- Gay Rights
- Gays in the Military
- Globalization
- Gun Control
- Harry Potter Controversy
- Hate Crimes
- Hate Speech
- Health Care Reform
- Holocaust Denial
- Holocaust Reparations
- Home Schooling
- Homelessness
- Illegal Immigration
- Insanity Defense
- Landmines
- Legal Drinking Age
- Maori People
- McCarthyism
- Media and Terrorism
- Media Images of African-Americans
- Media Images of Women
- Media in Wartime
- Medical Ethics
- Medical Marijuana
- Medical Malpractice
- Mental Health Policy
- Minimum Wage
- Miranda Rule
- Multiculturalism
- NAFTA
- Nuclear and Hazardous Waste
- Nuclear Disarmament
- Pharmaceutical Industry
- PLO
- Police Interrogation
- Political Ethics
- Pornography Debate
- Prescription Drug Reform
- Privacy
- Pro-Choice Movement
- Pro-Life Movement
- Right to Bear Arms (Second Amendment)
- School Violence
- School Vouchers
- Search and Seizure (Fourth Amendment)
- Separation of Church and State
- Sex Education
- Shakespeare Authorship Controversy
- Smoking Laws
- Social Security
- Standardized Testing
- Stem Cell Research
- Steroids
- Surrogate Motherhood
- Tax Reform
- Teenage Pregnancy
- Tibet
- Tobacco Industry
- Transracial Adoption
- Violence in the Media
- Whistleblowing
- Women in the Military
- Working Mothers
- Workplace Diversity
- Year Round School
10.11.05
Quotations References -- Explore for Starters
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Bartlett, John, comp. 1919. Familiar Quotations, 10th edition
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Bartlett's Familiar Quotations
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Quotations for Creative Thinking
Quotations for Creative Thinking (Creative Quotations) lets you search 50,0000 famous quotations and provides biographical information (and quotes) for 3000 ... www.creativequotations.com/ - 20k - |
A database of quotations. Contains a special section on love and marriage, useful for wedding toasts. www.aphids.com/quotes/index.shtml - 4k - Nov 8, 2005 - |
A collection of mathematical quotations culled from many sources. You may conduct a keyword search through the quotation database. math.furman.edu/~mwoodard/mquot.html - 6k - Nov 8, 2005 - |
Quotations in the Yahoo! Directory
Search sites featuring famous quotes, sayings, quips, phrases, and proverbs. Find quotes by a particular person, for a special occasion, or on themes such ... dir.yahoo.com/Reference/Quotations/ - 17k - Nov 8, 2005 - |
Quotations Home Page, containing approximately 25000 quotes in 30ish indexed collections. www.theotherpages.org/quote.html - 8k - |
Famous Quotations Network - Quotations, Quotes, Proverbs
A vast collection of searchable famous quotations and proverbs, sorted by categories and subjects, including authors biographies, and quotes citings, ... www.famous-quotations.com/ - 27k - |
2.11.05
General Form for Electronic References from apastyle.org
General Form for Electronic References
From the 5th Edition of the Publication Manual (© 2001)
Note: Some elements of the 5th edition's style guidelines for electronic resources differ from previously published guidelines.
Electronic sources include aggregated databases, online journals, Web sites or Web pages, newsgroups, Web- or e-mail-based discussion groups, and Web- or e-mail-based newsletters.
Online periodical:
Author, A. A., Author, B. B., & Author, C. C. (2000).
Title of article. Title of Periodical, xx, xxxxxx.
Retrieved month day, year, from source.
Online document:
Author, A. A. (2000). Title of work.
Retrieved month day, year, from source.
Detecting Tutor's Hand in Applicant's Essay-- from NY Times
Detecting Tutor's Hand in Applicant's Essay -- from New York Times
Published: November 2, 2005
It is the bane of college admissions officers: the highly polished, professionally edited personal essay that barely reflects the thinking or writing, let alone the personality, of a 17-year-old high school student.
"If it sounds like it was written by a 42-year-old attorney, chances are it was written by a 42-year-old attorney," said Lee Stetson, dean of admissions at the
Now colleges have a new tool to help them discern how much help students are getting on their applications: the SAT.
Since March, the SAT has included a 25-minute essay section. When reviewing an application, colleges can easily download the test essay from the College Board, obtaining a sample of the student's unedited writing. Many colleges say they plan to do so, at least in cases where there are questions about a student's writing aptitude.
In a survey of 374 top colleges and universities conducted by Kaplan, the test preparation company, 58 percent said they would use the SAT essay to evaluate whether students had received outside help on their application essays in cases where there appeared to be discrepancies in the applicants' writing levels. Thirteen percent said they would compare the essays for all applicants.
"What that is saying is, 'We know there are a lot of cooks in the soup on these application essays, and we want to make sure that the writing that you are able to produce on your own can keep up with that polished writing,' " said Jennifer Caran, national director for SAT and ACT programs for Kaplan.
Dan Saracino, the assistant provost at the University of Notre Dame, said that when the first batch of the March SAT's became available, he went online to look at the writing samples.
"I did compare the online written essay and the personal essay, and you can see the connection, and you can see when it's a forced style that's been taught by a tutor," Mr. Saracino said.
At Notre Dame, not every applicant's SAT essay will be reviewed, but the test may well be downloaded when there are questions about writing ability, Mr. Saracino said.
Given the volume of college applications, the two writing samples will not be routinely compared at most schools. But in an increasingly competitive market, the essays of borderline students are more likely to be reviewed.
"We will use them on an individual basis as we need to use them," said Marlyn McGrath Lewis, director of admissions at
Harvard is aware that some applicants get much more help than others on their applications, Ms. McGrath Lewis said.
"At Harvard, we try very hard not to over-reward extra preparation," she said. "We try not to base the admissions decision on someone being the perfectly buffed-up applicant."
Margit A. Dahl, the director of undergraduate admissions at Yale, said the university had no intention of reviewing 20,000 SAT essays. But in instances where there is a question about writing - for example, if a personal essay is well written, but the writing score on the SAT is low - admissions officers may download the SAT essay.
"You can certainly tell if there are serious grammatical glitches in the essay that was written in 25 minutes, and that means that without help, this student has some real trouble with writing," Ms. Dahl said.
Some argue that comparing the two essays is unfair. A student has far more time to polish an application essay than to burnish a 25-minute response. But educators make the case that basic writing and organizational skills should be consistent between the two samples.
"Schools recognize that this is a first draft and not polished work," said Ms. Caran of Kaplan, a former English teacher. "They want to get a sense of the students' innate writing abilities, to understand the students' thought processes and ability to express themselves, and whether that expression of thought is compatible with what they are saying in the application."
Complex sentence structure, the proper use of advanced vocabulary and clear expression should all be consistent between the two samples, she said.
But even a student's work on an SAT essay can be coached, as Ms. Caran points out. Students can be taught how to write a persuasive essay under time pressure, using organizational tips and practice, she said.
But admissions officers say they can see through that, too.
"You can see the canned responses," said Mr. Saracino, of Notre Dame. "It doesn't take a rocket scientist to identify that this is a pat response that is a result of Kaplan."
20.10.05
Writing a Process Essay-- Literary Education Online (LEO)
LEO: Literacy Education Online Writing a Process Essay |
What to consider when writing a process essay
A process paper either tells the reader how to do something or describes how something is done. As you write your process essay, consider the following:
- What process are you trying to explain? Why is it important?
- Who or what does the process affect?
- Are there different ways of doing the process? If so, what are they?
- Who are the readers? What knowledge do they need to understand this process?
- What skills/equipment are needed for this?
- How long does the process take? Is the outcome always the same?
- How many steps are there in the process?
- Why is each step important?
- What difficulties are involved in each step? How can they be overcome?
- Do any cautions need to be given?
- Does the process have definitions that need to be clarified?
- Are there other processes that are similar and could help illustrate the process that you are writing about?
- If needed, tell what should not be done or why something should be done.
- Process papers are often written in the second person (you), but some teacher prefer that you avoid this. Check with your teacher.
Your responses to these questions and statements should enable you to write an effective process essay.
Suggested transition words to lead readers through your essay
Process essays are generally organized according to time: that is, they begin with the first step in the process and proceed in time until the last step in the process. It's natural, then, that transition words indicate that one step has been completed and a new one will begin. Some common transitional words used in process essays are listed below:
One time | Transition | Another time | |
TIME | |||
After a few hours, | Immediately following, | ||
Afterwards, | Initially, | ||
At last | In the end, | ||
At the same time, | In the future, | ||
Before | In the meantime, | ||
Before this, | In the meanwhile, | ||
Currently, | Last, Last but not least, Lastly, | ||
During | Later, | ||
Eventually, | Meanwhile, | ||
Finally, | Next, Soon after, | ||
First, Second, Third, etc. | Previously, | ||
First of all, | Simultaneously, | ||
Formerly | Subsequently, | ||
Immediately before, | Then, |
A Sample Process Essay
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17.10.05
Revised Assignment Schedule
Week | | Topic | Assignments due | Rhetoric | Reader | Handbook |
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1 | | Introduction | | 1, Critical Thinking and | 9, Personal Narrative | 35, Marking Punctuation |
| Unit I Assignment: | |||||
9/1/2005 | Narrative and Descriptive Writing | |||||
2 | 9/6/2005 | | | 2, Getting Started | 10, Personal Reflection | 36, Checking Mechanics |
3 | 9/13/2005 | Writing Process | Unit I Paper | 3, Planning | 11, Personal Description | Multilingual and ESL Guidelines |
4 | 9/20/2005 | Writing and Rewriting | 4, Drafting | | | |
5 | | Narrative and Descriptive Writing | | 5, Revising | 6, Editing and Proofreading | Parts of Speech |
9/27/2005 | ||||||
6 | | Analytical Writing | Unit II Paper | 7, Submitting | 12, Cause and Effect | Parts of Speech |
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10/4/2005 | ||||||
7 | | Comparison and contrast | | 8, One Writer’s Process. | 13, Comparison and Contrast | Sentence Basics |
10/11/2005 | ||||||
8 | 10/18/2005 | Classification | | | 14, Classification | Sentence Problems |
9 | 10/25/2005 | Process | Portofolio I Due | | 15, Process Writing | |
10 | | Definition | | | 16, Definition | Numbers, Word Parts, and Idioms |
11/1/2005 | Vocabulary and writing | Using the Right Word | ||||
11 | | Persuasive Writing | Unit III Paper Due | | 17, Strategies for Arggumentation and Persuasion | Understanding Grammar |
| Rhetoric of Persuasion | |||||
11/8/2005 | | |||||
12 | 11/15/2005 | Defining a point of view | | | 19, Persuading Readers to Act | 39, Constructing sentences |
13 | 11/22/2005 | Responding to an argument | | | 20, Arguing Against a Claim | 40, Avoiding Sentence Eerrors |
14 | 11/29/2005 | Problem-solution format | Portfolio II | | 21, Proposing a Solution | |
15 | 12/6/2005 | Review | | | | |
16 | 12/13/2005 | Final Exam Week | | | | |
10.10.05
Writing Skills Links-- From McGraw-Hill
Fundamentals
Links to websites to help one with the fundamentals of adaptation, construction of clear sentences and paragraphs, and effect are limited. Included below are links to both print and electronic reference works as well as links to sites with software and instructions for creating documents.
A selected bibliography | A selected bibliography of good sources for basic writing skills in print form. |
A.Word.A.Day is a site that not only presents a word of the day along with its meaning and pronunciation, but it will also send you the word a day if you register for the free service. It's a nice way to build a vocabulary while getting each day off to a good start. | |
This article helps you know how to present compound words. | |
Roget's Thesaurus | Roget's Thesaurus is an interactive online program. One enters the word needing substitution and the site returns a suggestion with links to other words. |
The Elements of Style | The Elements of Style is a classic book written to help writers with language, composition, and form as well as a few other matters. |
The real estate B.S. artist detection checklist | This site interprets in plain English how some in real estate use words to manipulate and deceive readers. |
The Wordsmyth Dictionary-Thesaurus | The Wordsmyth Dictionary-Thesaurus is a site where you can look up words as well as enjoy a words of the week, word link contest, and other word fun. |
Unmapped Exercise | This interactive page lets users see and understand the value of mapped information. |
2004 List of Banished Words | Since 1976 Lake Superior State University Word Banishment selection committee has compiled its annual list of words banished for misuse, overuse and general uselessness. |
4.10.05
Autobiography -- Dante
I was born in
After working as a doctor in
Once again I was exposed to a whole new world leaving behind my friends. I found myself starting over once again. Somehow, since I no longer had a language barrier, I was able to make some new friends. Before I knew it, I was in high school. Later did I come to find out that Robin Williams, an international super star mostly known for his humor graduated the same school. I studied at
After rebuilding my life for the third time to the point where I then considered
We moved to
After working for Helzberg Diamonds for a couple of months, I decided to move back to
I can honestly say that my past experiences, events, and memories make me who I am today. Every individual contains the story of life, their life. Life is an unexpected journey, in which the story is written not in a single day, or month, or even year. It is a story that evolves over decades. When life begins, it is almost as if an empty book is opened with the child’s name on the cover. As they grow, the blank pages inside begin to fill up with words, and the story evolves. Everything he/she does will become a memory, an experience, a story of the past. Until one day, the last sentence is written. The last words are spoken; and the book is closed, as their ashes flow with the wind. Life has a beginning but it also has an end. It is up to us use the time in between to write the greatest stories of all by turning our dreams into reality. One cannot predict what’s to come in the future yet one has the ability to create the future as he/she desires.
29.9.05
Link to English Page
http://www.englishpage.com/
27.9.05
Narrative Assignment -- Dante's Valentine Narrative
Valentines Day!
I spoke for a few moments sharing with the class that I had long wished to tell her how I felt about her. “You know there is one big reason I am standing here today and that is to ask you one question, so here it goes.” These were the words that I spoke before I did the most surprising thing of all.
I got down on one knee and simply said “Caitlin, will you be my Valentine?”
As I stood there barely breathing, waiting for the answer that would make my day, yet at the same time prepared for the answer that would destroy my intentions. The next few minutes seemed like hours, as I glanced into her eyes and held her hand, the whole class went from laughter to disbelief, to absolute silence in a matter of milliseconds. I could hear my own heart beat, thump thump, thump, thump. I remember thinking to myself what am I doing? Am I nuts? A million thoughts went through my head as I observed her laugh off the shock and begin to speak. The time had come.
In a gentle voice she spoke these words…
“I would love to be your Valentine and thank you for this special gift, but…” She paused.
At first my eyes lit up brighter than any star in the sky in the darkest of nights, my smile so full of life I cannot describe in words how relieved I was, and then the word “but,” the word that scared me the most appeared out of thin air. I still held that smile, hoping for the best. “I have a boyfriend,” she said. My heart sank to the floor faster then I could remember as I caught someone in the front of the class room shed a tear in the corner of my eye.
I stood up still smiling, I knew that regardless of the result, I did what I came there to do. I received the most exhilarating hug from Caitlin and still keep in touch with her to this very day. I learned that life doesn’t always turn out as you planned and that you should always prepare for the worst yet hope for the best. Most importantly, if you really want something, and I mean really want something, you have to risk it all, and go out and get it, otherwise life will only be a series of unfulfilled dreams and wonders.
Yes, it was one of the most embarrassing moments of my life, but I can also say that I left that classroom with a story that I will continue to tell for the rest of my life.
25.9.05
Grammar Tips from ICTY
Five short answers:
1. Learn as much as you can from practice and experience rather than text books
2. Keep your own examples and observe patterns (and exceptions) in the language
3. Focus on particular areas which give you difficulty (eg. articles, relative clauses)
4. Learn as much as you can from any feedback you get on your written English
5. Remember that almost every grammatical 'rule' is likely to be breakable in some situations (so don't become slave to rules!)
As English becomes more of a diverse and international language it is less and less possible to point to an authority and say 'that is the correct way!' (or 'that is a mistake!').But there are of course general conventions for British and American English grammar which you need to know.
For reference, I would recommend Advanced Grammar in Use (Second edition 2005) by Martin Hewings (Cambridge University Press, http://cambridge.org/uk/, ISBN 0521532914 with answers). This book covers grammatical points in an imaginative way, giving examples and practice exercises on facing pages. Also has some useful summaries at the back. If you buy this book for self-study, make sure you get the one with the answer key!
For more practice exercises, try Advanced Language Practice (Second edition 2004) by Michael Vince(Macmillan Heinemann, http://www.macmillaneducation.com/ , ISBN 0435241249 with answers).
Online grammar resources can be very mixed in quality and scope. I would recommend the OWL (Online Writing Lab) at Purdue University for guidance on grammar and writing at http://owl.english.purdue.edu. Go to 'Handouts and Materials' for options.
For some useful quizzes on English grammar, donated by teachers, see http://a4esl.org/ (uses mostly Java and Flash).
I would also strongly recommend the pages on tenses at Englishpage.com. All the tenses are explained clearly and there are online practice exercises for each one. See http://www.englishpage.com/verbpage/verbtenseintro.html.
For questions on usage you might try the vast Alt. English Usage at http://alt-usage-english.org/index.shtml. This is searchable and very good for settling disputes over usage, such as: ‘Do we say ‘different from, different to or different than?'
More grammar guides are at the US Webster University site http://webster.commnet.edu/grammar/index.htm where there is also an online text book on writing called 'Sentence Sense' at http://webster.commnet.edu/sensen/index.html.
A teacher, David Tillyer, has produced a useful summary of a tricky area - gerunds and infinitives - at http://www.geocities.com/gwyni_99/gerinfless.html. He also offers a list of verbs and practice tests.
24.9.05
Fall 2005 Weekly CalendarTuesday and Thursday
Tuesday and Thursday Fall 2005 Weekly Calendar
1 9/1/2005
2 9/6/2005 Holiday 9/8/2005
3 9/13/2005 9/15/2005
4 9/20/2005 9/22/2005
5 9/27/2005 9/29/2005
6 10/4/2005 10/6/2005
7 10/11/2005 10/13/2005
8 10/18/2005 10/20/2005
9 10/25/2005 10/27/2005
10 11/1/2005 11/3/2005
11 11/8/2005 11/10/2005
12 11/15/2005 11/17/2005
13 11/22/2005 Holiday 11/24/2005
14 11/29/2005 12/1/2005
15 12/6/2005 12/8/2005